Booklab: First Pages--Sailing out of a marriage and mysterious pie

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It’s a new Booklab: First pages episode! At some point—maybe next week—these episodes will go out only to our fellow Stickers (supporters of the podcast). Want to join that crew, where you’ll be able to send in your own first page for the pod, join write-alongs and get AMAs from our hosts and guest book coaches?
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On today’s episode, we discuss the first pages of SAILING TO THE MOON: THE TWO YEARS AT SEA THAT SANK MY MARRIAGE, a memoir and The Pie Window, a novel. Would we turn the page? Opinions are mixed, but good advice for improving—these first pages and yours—abounds. THANK YOU to the writers willing to submit their work for our discussion.
Did you like First pages? Have ideas for how we can make it better? We’d love to hear it and we’ll talk back, so comment away.
We offered some comps to our first submitter:
Jennie offered Between Two Worlds: An Inspiring Story of a Kiwi Woman Who Left Her Heart in Uganda

Jess offers Wind, a movie from her teenage years
And to our second submitter:
The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo, Taylor Jenkins Reid
The Twisted Ones, T. Kingfisher
A Prayer for Owen Meany, John Irving
PS to the second submitter: we also wanted a little hint about the pie window on that first page!
Want to submit a first page to Booklab? Fill out the form HERE.
Theme music credit: “Circle,” by Phoebe Lahey
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